He stood there gazing at her when it was raining, remembering the past when he used to dance with her when it used to rain.
Now everything has changed. Being a husband and a father, he controlled his feelings towards his first crush who was his life before. She was unaware of him watching her.
my second effort on 55 fiction.. :)
you can find my first effort of 55 fiction here.. {which was written as a guest post for princess sonshu :)}
in btw, Kajal had awarded me the golden heart award few days back.. thanks a lot Kajal.. :)
also, Nikhil has given me two awards.. one is the sweet sister and another is cutest blogger award! Thanks a lot to u too, bro!
one more award from Sam, which is called free spirited award! Thanks a bunch, sam! :)
luv ya loads! :D
am displaying all the awards on the right side bar of my blog ... :)
16 comments:
Eee...u did the first 55 on my blog! :-) Congo on the award!!!Im first??
Coming to this one i cant say anything as i too am new to 55's so acc to me it was ok! good
Hey that was great effort. :)
Cong for al ur awards.. :)
beautiful... and tell u wat... there would be many people doing that too in real life :)
take care da... cheers...
that was a sweet 55F written by you dear..!!!
and congos for the awards..!!
just realised 55 fiction means a post with just 55 words :) Good job for something with such a restriction :)
Cheers
CRD
good job sweetie!! :) and congrats for the awards. :)
Good one :) Congratulations :) You deserve them :)
And of course, I'm sorry for the delay... Wasn't around for sometime...
@ sonshu
yes.. and thnx for the congos! nd u r first.. :D
@ sonshu
:D
@ Diya
thnk u!
@ Shruthi
Thnx! :)
@ Arv
hmm.. quite true.. :)
@ Yamini
thnx :) and thnx again! :D
@ CRD
oh :) thnx for the appreciation
@ Ria
thnk u :)
@ kido
thnx!
its alright..
that first crush....
heart melts..
chriz
@ chriz
:)
ur a champion when it comes to writing stories WOW! I really cant do it ya know...Im a hopeless story teller lol!
Keshi.
:( sad.....
but the way you have written it is really good!!!!
keep up the good work sweetie.... :)
congrats on ur awards.. :)
a pat on your back.. :)
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