Thursday, May 21, 2009

He stood there...

He stood there gazing at her when it was raining, remembering the past when he used to dance with her when it used to rain.

Now everything has changed. Being a husband and a father, he controlled his feelings towards his first crush who was his life before. She was unaware of him watching her.


my second effort on 55 fiction.. :)
you can find my first effort of 55 fiction here.. {which was written as a guest post for princess sonshu :)}

in btw, Kajal had awarded me the golden heart award few days back.. thanks a lot Kajal.. :)
also, Nikhil has given me two awards.. one is the sweet sister and another is cutest blogger award! Thanks a lot to u too, bro!
one more award from Sam,
which is called free spirited award! Thanks a bunch, sam! :)
luv ya loads! :D

am displaying all the awards on the right side bar of my blog ... :)

16 comments:

Sonshu said...

Eee...u did the first 55 on my blog! :-) Congo on the award!!!Im first??

Sonshu said...

Coming to this one i cant say anything as i too am new to 55's so acc to me it was ok! good

Diya said...

Hey that was great effort. :)

Shruti Narayanan said...

Cong for al ur awards.. :)

Arv said...

beautiful... and tell u wat... there would be many people doing that too in real life :)

take care da... cheers...

Yamini Meduri said...

that was a sweet 55F written by you dear..!!!

and congos for the awards..!!

CRD said...

just realised 55 fiction means a post with just 55 words :) Good job for something with such a restriction :)

Cheers
CRD

Rià said...

good job sweetie!! :) and congrats for the awards. :)

Anonymous said...

Good one :) Congratulations :) You deserve them :)

And of course, I'm sorry for the delay... Wasn't around for sometime...

Swetha Padakandla said...

@ sonshu
yes.. and thnx for the congos! nd u r first.. :D

@ sonshu
:D

@ Diya
thnk u!

Swetha Padakandla said...

@ Shruthi
Thnx! :)

@ Arv
hmm.. quite true.. :)

@ Yamini
thnx :) and thnx again! :D

Swetha Padakandla said...

@ CRD
oh :) thnx for the appreciation

@ Ria
thnk u :)

@ kido
thnx!
its alright..

Anya said...

that first crush....

heart melts..

chriz

Swetha Padakandla said...

@ chriz
:)

Keshi said...

ur a champion when it comes to writing stories WOW! I really cant do it ya know...Im a hopeless story teller lol!

Keshi.

Namana said...

:( sad.....
but the way you have written it is really good!!!!
keep up the good work sweetie.... :)
congrats on ur awards.. :)
a pat on your back.. :)