"We cant go through this. I am really sorry. Forget what happened between us!" he said as she was watching him dumbstruck!
Her dreams were shattered and she wept to her heart content. It was 2 days back that he had proposed her. She always liked him and same with him. They thought it was love. But much to her surprise it turned out to be a nightmare. She stopped talking to him and went on moving with her career.
After two years, he came to back to her asking for friendship. She thought he must have changed and accepted his friendship. Though she was still attracted to him, she lay in patience hoping for him to understand her feelings. As she thought, he was attracted and said that he likes her. She was overjoyed and was happy that finally he did come back to her again. But the happiness stayed for only few days. He told her that he was drunk and whatever he said was meaningless. He never loved her.
She stood there silently, her heart broken, with rage in her minds, tears rolling down. She was now angry on herself. She had been a fool all the while in her life. At last she made up her mind not to love anyone in her life and not to trust men.
P.S: This is an attempt of fiction. Got the idea last night and I felt the story would be good and hence wrote it down here. Hope it has come out well! :)
21 comments:
Hey shwetha! Long time since ur last post! Lovely story and i hope to see more frm u!
And can u tell me how to get someone do a guest post on ur blog? I mean how to invite them?
wow long time since ur last post! It was a very nice story Swetha.....keep writing more!
hey swetha, good start :) dil mange more more and more :)
just lengthen the stories u write :)
nice attempt babe!! :)
never expect something and we end up like this...:(...poor her heart broken....good on the fiction sweet-ha ..:)..
urs..hemu..
sad..... :(
but not all men are like that! there are 1 in a million good people too right?! :P
from that girls point of view, and what she has been through, understandable......
well written.... keep it upp!
Good attempt Swetha...I liked it.
**He told her that he was drunk and whatever he said was meaningless. He never loved her.
Most guys r drunk half the time when it comes to LOVE :)
Keshi.
Fiction but with a touch of reality... good one swetha
@ sonshu
:) yep, wil be posting more
and for guest post... go to settings-> permissions and then add authors.. after the guest post is written, you can remove them from the same 'permissions' tab
@ mayz
thnk u :)
@ muthu
:D
@ aruna
thnx for the appreciation
@ sam
sure, wil try ur idea
@ Ria
thnk u! :)
@ Hemanth
:( yeah...
@ naman
I agree :P
and thnx for visiting the blog
@ keshi
exactly! i hav seen many cases lyk this
@ vaisakh
glad u liked it :)
that must have been painful for her :(
sad but well written :)
take care... cheers...
hey ths good piece..
nice attempt..
Please dow rite with some happy ending too...
Pallav
@ Arv
:) thnx..
@ pallav
thnx, wil surely consider ur suggestion!
Yep thats what i did too but i thought there is another way! Thanks anyways!
Swetha i have a new series HER....on my blog and many more series coming up so do check them out and comment...Also follow my blog
@ sonshu
sure.. am on my way to ur blog.. :)
Nice thought Shwetha.....and seriously yaar...we girls are ditched many a times in life...but still we trust ppl always...!!!
@ yamini
i agree... whatever happns we trust ppl always..
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