He was a weird guy, very naughty and always first in doing mischief.. to add more.. a big flirt! If he sees any beautiful girl smiling at him, immediately he is on action. Within 1 day, they both would be found together in theaters or restaurants. That would last only for a week or so. After that another girl.. :P Quite a big flirt. :D
Other side of him.. He is a orphan.. stays with his best friends and always cool.. :D Did I forget to mention his name? Daya.. i don't know whether it suits him or not!
She was cool, bindaas and happy go along kind of chirpy little girl. Very bold and intelligent. She has no father but a very caring mother. As soon as she finished her studies, she started to work to make a living. Being an independent girl, and strong minded she was happy living with her mom. They had their own house on top of a small hill. They had an outhouse which they used to give for rent. The house was very pretty and neat. The view from the top was just marvelous. You could see a dense forest on one side and opposite to that a very calm beach. And did u ask her name? Well, its Shivani.. i guess the name is as cute as her.. :)
and yeh, she was working as a teacher. :D
"Mamma, am leaving.. I will not be coming early today. Have to take special classes for kids as exams are nearing.. bye"
"Shini, cum back before dark. Its not safe u know"
"Oh ho! I am not scared of anything. U relax mamma. bubyeee.."
Daya as usual driving his car off to work, saw her near the bus stop. He was attracted to her immediately. JERK.. the vehicle stopped front of her. His friends fell bumping. "Abey, what u doing? Ride properly. We don't want to die so soon. We are still bachelors"
Daya: Err.. What is the way to Kohallam street?
Shivani: Hmmm. U have stopped your vehicle in kohallam street only.
Daya: Oh. I see. Where are you going?
Shivani: None of your business, Mr!
Daya: My name is Daya. Mr Daya!
Shivani: Whatever!
Daya: Want lift?
Shivani: No, Thanks..
By then her bus came and she ran towards the bus. She turned back and gave a dirty look on his face and went off!
Ahh ho! I forgot to mention his friends name!
They are Chethan and Vinay.
Chethan: "Again? Oh god, I dont know how many more girls you want to spoil"
Daya: "I am not spoiling them. I just want them to get attracted to me."
Vinay: "Why don't you marry someone. She will always be attracted to you."
Daya: "Marriage?? Bull shit! I hate it.. There is no connection between me and marriage! So forget it."
Vinay: "Alright! Now off we go, we are already late.."
P.S: This is my first attempt on love story! The next part would come soon.. Whether it would be a sad ending or a happy ending, just wait and see! :D
21 comments:
me first :P..
urs..hemu..
as i told u before ...no one beat u in conversations ....they are awesome :)..i like the name shivani...daya looks new :)....nice one sweet-ha....well looking forward for the next part :)...
urs..hemu..
Hmm...Nice! my frnds name is Shivani! Daya is a new name! Nice story..will wait for next part
hmmm... interesting one... will await the next part :)
:):).. cute name - shivani
ahhhh i wanna kno how he finally gets her attracted twds him...i can tk some tips :) so waitin for d nxt part eagerly :)
@ hemu
yep, hemu.. u r first :D
@ hemu
thnx for the appreciation. :) glad u liked the name..
@ sonshu
:D second part is on the way..
@ arv
:D
@ muthu
:D the name is indeed a nice one i guess, so as u all like it..
@ Mayz
tips? hehee
ok, just wait and see..
Nice write up babe!!and i 2nd Mayz. ;)
u r becoming a brilliant writer Swetha!
Keshi.
@ Ria
Thank u.
@ keshi
am still learning.. bt thnx for the appreciation :)
shivani....
shall i make some numerolical inflicted changes to tat name?
nice one sweths..
loved the conversational style adopted by you here
chriz
@ chriz
sure, go ahead.. u r an expert in that.. :D
nice to know the u liked it..
Nice style... Awaiting the next part :)
@ kido
thnx! :)
good on the start mate :). second part is on. start is like DADA made in the ODIS :). bang on and powerful :)
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