Thursday, May 7, 2009

Choti Si Mulaqat - Part 1

He was a weird guy, very naughty and always first in doing mischief.. to add more.. a big flirt! If he sees any beautiful girl smiling at him, immediately he is on action. Within 1 day, they both would be found together in theaters or restaurants. That would last only for a week or so. After that another girl.. :P Quite a big flirt. :D
Other side of him.. He is a orphan.. stays with his best friends and always cool.. :D Did I forget to mention his name? Daya.. i don't know whether it suits him or not!

She was cool, bindaas and happy go along kind of chirpy little girl. Very bold and intelligent. She has no father but a very caring mother. As soon as she finished her studies, she started to work to make a living. Being an independent girl, and strong minded she was happy living with her mom. They had their own house on top of a small hill. They had an outhouse which they used to give for rent. The house was very pretty and neat. The view from the top was just marvelous. You could see a dense forest on one side and opposite to that a very calm beach. And did u ask her name? Well, its Shivani.. i guess the name is as cute as her.. :)
and yeh, she was working as a teacher. :D

"Mamma, am leaving.. I will not be coming early today. Have to take special classes for kids as exams are nearing.. bye"
"Shini, cum back before dark. Its not safe u know"
"Oh ho! I am not scared of anything. U relax mamma. bubyeee.."

Daya as usual driving his car off to work, saw her near the bus stop. He was attracted to her immediately. JERK.. the vehicle stopped front of her. His friends fell bumping. "Abey, what u doing? Ride properly. We don't want to die so soon. We are still bachelors"

Daya: Err.. What is the way to Kohallam street?
Shivani: Hmmm. U have stopped your vehicle in kohallam street only.
Daya: Oh. I see. Where are you going?
Shivani: None of your business, Mr!
Daya: My name is Daya. Mr Daya!
Shivani: Whatever!
Daya: Want lift?
Shivani: No, Thanks..
By then her bus came and she ran towards the bus. She turned back and gave a dirty look on his face and went off!

Ahh ho! I forgot to mention his friends name!
They are Chethan and Vinay.
Chethan: "Again? Oh god, I dont know how many more girls you want to spoil"
Daya: "I am not spoiling them. I just want them to get attracted to me."
Vinay: "Why don't you marry someone. She will always be attracted to you."
Daya: "Marriage?? Bull shit! I hate it.. There is no connection between me and marriage! So forget it."
Vinay: "Alright! Now off we go, we are already late.."

P.S: This is my first attempt on love story! The next part would come soon.. Whether it would be a sad ending or a happy ending, just wait and see! :D

21 comments:

Hemanth Potluri said...

me first :P..

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

as i told u before ...no one beat u in conversations ....they are awesome :)..i like the name shivani...daya looks new :)....nice one sweet-ha....well looking forward for the next part :)...

urs..hemu..

Sonshu said...

Hmm...Nice! my frnds name is Shivani! Daya is a new name! Nice story..will wait for next part

Arv said...

hmmm... interesting one... will await the next part :)

muthu said...

:):).. cute name - shivani

Lucifer said...

ahhhh i wanna kno how he finally gets her attracted twds him...i can tk some tips :) so waitin for d nxt part eagerly :)

Swetha Padakandla said...

@ hemu
yep, hemu.. u r first :D

Swetha Padakandla said...

@ hemu
thnx for the appreciation. :) glad u liked the name..

Swetha Padakandla said...

@ sonshu
:D second part is on the way..

Swetha Padakandla said...

@ arv
:D

Swetha Padakandla said...

@ muthu
:D the name is indeed a nice one i guess, so as u all like it..

Swetha Padakandla said...

@ Mayz
tips? hehee
ok, just wait and see..

Rià said...

Nice write up babe!!and i 2nd Mayz. ;)

Keshi said...

u r becoming a brilliant writer Swetha!

Keshi.

Swetha Padakandla said...

@ Ria
Thank u.

Swetha Padakandla said...

@ keshi
am still learning.. bt thnx for the appreciation :)

Anya said...

shivani....

shall i make some numerolical inflicted changes to tat name?

nice one sweths..

loved the conversational style adopted by you here

chriz

Swetha Padakandla said...

@ chriz
sure, go ahead.. u r an expert in that.. :D

nice to know the u liked it..

Anonymous said...

Nice style... Awaiting the next part :)

Swetha Padakandla said...

@ kido
thnx! :)

Anonymous said...

good on the start mate :). second part is on. start is like DADA made in the ODIS :). bang on and powerful :)