she sat there thinkingwhen the candles blew off
she went up to the terrace
to see the beautiful moon shining
she forgot all her sorrows
and was busy watching them
the moon had spread its beam everywhere
& the stars were twinkling all over
she felt the moon was smiling at her
telling her to forget all her pains
& the stars were twinkling and telling
that they all are there with her
she went & slept peacefully
with a smile on her face & with peace of mind.
20 comments:
beautiful poem...but the she can be realted to u in most of the things...because ur the reason to smile :)..keep smiling tc have a gr8 weekend...
urs..hemu..
ha haa... it was more than the stars and moon for me :)
VERY NICE.
nicce poem....she must have had a great smile all the while from then on..!!!
wah ji swethaji, moon shining :)
u r poet too :)
@ hemu
thnx buddy
@ arv
thts gr8 :D
@ santoshi
:)
@ yamini
yep. she was smiling all the while after tht :)
@ sam
just learning! :)
her name is nila.. she was my moon :)
my ex girl
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@ chriz
u let out a secret! :P
can u temme whr to find this moon...
i searched everywhr but cudnt find it...
then someone told me to look in d mirror...but all i cud see were scars
i feel like an insomniac right now ;)
@ Mayz
who told u to look into the mirror? :P
wel, its nt ur fault.. its his fault! :D
u can try searching moon in google! nwdays moon is available in google too :D
@ farah
y? u too wanna see moon? ;)
Very Nice....
remembered of the old song, 'woh chand kile... woh tare hasi... yeh raat ajab matwari hai.....'
:) thank you chanda maama for bringing the smile back on my friends face!! :)
@ suresh
:D
@ naman
hehe! so sweet of u.. :)
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