Friday, April 10, 2009

the moon smiled..

she sat there thinking
when the candles blew off

she went up to the terrace
to see the beautiful moon shining

she forgot all her sorrows
and was busy watching them

the moon had spread its beam everywhere
& the stars were twinkling all over

she felt the moon was smiling at her
telling her to forget all her pains

& the stars were twinkling and telling
that they all are there with her

she went & slept peacefully
with a smile on her face & with peace of mind.

20 comments:

Hemanth Potluri said...

beautiful poem...but the she can be realted to u in most of the things...because ur the reason to smile :)..keep smiling tc have a gr8 weekend...

urs..hemu..

Arv said...

ha haa... it was more than the stars and moon for me :)

santoshi said...

VERY NICE.

Unknown said...

nicce poem....she must have had a great smile all the while from then on..!!!

Anonymous said...

wah ji swethaji, moon shining :)

u r poet too :)

Swetha Padakandla said...

@ hemu
thnx buddy

Swetha Padakandla said...

@ arv
thts gr8 :D

Swetha Padakandla said...

@ santoshi
:)

Swetha Padakandla said...

@ yamini
yep. she was smiling all the while after tht :)

Swetha Padakandla said...

@ sam
just learning! :)

Anya said...

her name is nila.. she was my moon :)

my ex girl

www.chronicwriter.com

Swetha Padakandla said...

@ chriz
u let out a secret! :P

Lucifer said...

can u temme whr to find this moon...

i searched everywhr but cudnt find it...
then someone told me to look in d mirror...but all i cud see were scars

Think Tank said...

i feel like an insomniac right now ;)

Swetha Padakandla said...

@ Mayz
who told u to look into the mirror? :P
wel, its nt ur fault.. its his fault! :D

u can try searching moon in google! nwdays moon is available in google too :D

Swetha Padakandla said...

@ farah
y? u too wanna see moon? ;)

Suresh Kumar said...

Very Nice....
remembered of the old song, 'woh chand kile... woh tare hasi... yeh raat ajab matwari hai.....'

Namana said...

:) thank you chanda maama for bringing the smile back on my friends face!! :)

Swetha Padakandla said...

@ suresh
:D

Swetha Padakandla said...

@ naman
hehe! so sweet of u.. :)