She was awakened when the lights went off. She saw the clock and it said 11 PM. "I must have slept early while reading the book", Maya thought to herself.
She got up, lit the candle and made sure that all the doors and windows are shut. She laid on the sofa and tried to relax when suddenly she heard the waving sound from outside. She was not sure what it was and hence, opened the balcony door and saw that it was breezing very much outside. She stood there enjoying the cool breeze. It started drizzling and she could feel the water drop falling on her face. She closed her eyes and said "I love this".
As she opened her eyes, she was there standing with her sister enjoying the first rain of the year. Her dad shouting from behind "You girls are crazy to get wet. Please come in! If not, you will catch cold"
"No pappa. We luv this. It is the first rain of the year. Don't you know how we enjoy watching this everytime. We will come in soon." she answered.
Maya always loved the first drops falling from the sky and the aroma of the ground when the first rain drops falls down. It's completely a different smell and it makes her go and dance right on the middle of the road!
She was now dancing with her sister rejoicing the wonderful rain that she always likes. She waved to the people who were rushing to their respective homes. She could see her neighbor friend sipping hot coffee sitting near the window. She looked at her and smiled. She turned back to see her dad starring at her angrily but she gave back her cunning smile and made her dad smile back. She closed her eyes and said once again "I love this so much" .
As she opened her eyes once again, she could see herself all alone standing next to the door of her balcony in the beautiful apartment where she stays. It was the same first rain of the year and she was smiling watching it pouring down. She was standing there but dancing in her heart, humming a melodious slow song, remembering her childhood. She felt like she heard her dad shouting but turned to see no one there. She smiled once again. She smelt the same aroma that she always liked. She felt like walking and running in the rain but she couldn't do it. But she was happy to see the first rain... the very same first rain that she always enjoyed to see... and then she told to herself.. "I love this so much!"
37 comments:
you have described that feeling in a beautiful way swetha..keep it up..
Hmm...Nice descriptions!
now i need a bath// i remembered that i havent taken today's bath...
Kewl one mate...
I still do this :P
transition of a dazed state...a happy dazed state...of memories n moments relived...
loved it!!!
wonderful description Swetha.Even i still do this! Hey and glad you liked my blog.
i had similar feeling of rain once...:)..i thought i posted that to...it was awesome sweet-ha...loved it :)..
urs..hemu..
Good feeling!! :) Liked it.
@ vaisakh
thnx :)
@ shonshu
thnk u!
@ Chriz
oh god! go hurry up :P
@ arv
nice to knw tht arv :)
@ mayz
glad u liked it..
@ aruna
thnk u! nice to knw tht u too do the same
@ hemu
thnx :)
@ Ria
glad u liked it :)
oh ..i so wish i cud ...but neway ..happy raining :)
@ farah
thnx dear :)
Wonderfully written Sweta...
very well described...
Pallav
@ pallav
thnk u! :)
hello shwetha... what a lovely blog you have! and i loved this post...
my first time here, and liked it so much!. will keep coming back.
take care. do visit...
@ LGL
thnx for visiting! and am happy tht u liked my blog..
will visit ur blog soon.. :)
Swetha!
My name is Sonshu not Shonshu! Please call me Sonshu
@ sonshu
oops.. extremely sorry!! :-|
missed you during this years first rain..... :(
but sombody got to experiance it in s beatiful apartment i see.......!! ;P
@ naman
missed u too.. :)
and the experience.. its horrible.. :-|
hearty and a descriptive post......
you should try out this 55 fiction (in a way rain is a character in it.. )think you will like it
http://average-everyday.blogspot.com/2009/04/short-stories-55-fiction.html
@ muthu
thnx a lot for ur idea.. wil try it sometime for sure
wil read ur blog too.. :)
thnx for visiting!
gr you have kept the options open for this post...I also love first rain and the smell of wet earth
@ ashish
thnx for visiting ma blog :)
happy to knw tht u too luv first rain
this's not called story .... ??!!!
@ arun
fiction scene wud be the ryt word! :D
random thoughts knit into beautiful words..loved it Swetha!
Keshi.
@ keshi
thnk u! :)
Beautiful !!! Aaah rain rain ...
Cheers,
adisha
ps - how do you get your signature at the bottom of the post ??
@ adisha
:D thnx!
for creating signature go to the link:
http://www.mylivesignature.com/
u can easily do it thr.. :)
hey swetha, u do write great fiction too :). lovely stuff. pls do read my bit of fiction too on the blog. in here after long time :(
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