Dear Indu,
I am the happiest person today coz u smiled at me. I was waiting for this very day. After 3 years of me knowing you without making you realize it, and to get the smile which is equal to thousands of those stars smiling at me when am lonely in this world without you. I know you are the angel from fairy land who came to me. I realized it long back and wanted to make sure that you yourself will smile at me one day. I dont want you to remember me. I am far from your life now.
It was just those three days of my life that was so special when you were with me. You had lost your memory and you were stuck in that bus sitting next to me. I took great care of you and had fallen in love with you. I had taken you to the top of those mountains where that small village was. We stayed there for three days and at last you said you liked me. I was in the heaven and was overjoyed. It was that night when you were talking in your dreams that I found out you were already engaged. Engaged with the love of your life. I came to know the truth that you both were in so much love and had come for a holiday trip with him. You had lost your way in between those woods and was hit by a branch of the tree and you lost memory. You said everything in your dreams. I realized I was not the one for you. I asked one of those villagers to take you to the hospital and give the best treatment possible to regain back your memory. Everything happened as I wanted. Your memory came back and you forgot me. You went back to your love.
I realized that we were working in the same company too. I was happy seeing you daily. I forgot all my pain, your smiles gave me energy to live, your voice made me to feel that you are near to me. But I always wanted you to smile at me and you did it today. Thank you very much for that. God will always be with you coz I have already prayed him to take great care of you and he will.
Yours forever
Varun
P.S: Am completely getting involved in fiction these days! not sure, why.. but getting addicted to it.. :)
44 comments:
lovely fiction swetha...
urs..hemu..
u brought pain in the beginning of the post and then turned it into happiness with loads of smiles...done it awesomly sweetha..job done awesome...well do one thing write a love letter to some one other then fiction :P hehe..just kiddin have a gr8 week :)..
urs..hemu..
i'm so happy 2 read this...i really dunno y..
:) A mushy one.
and yeah writing fiction is really a addiction.
keep writing....
cheers.
touching one... stories like these have happened in life too mate :(
take care... cheers...
fiction blooming out here. lovely one this. Swetha, u coming of age. addiction is very surreal and its making ur readers happy.
keep writing
this kinda reminds me of dat kamal hassan sridevi movie...nice twist in d end thou :)
Oh! That was awesome, sent chills as I imagined this happening in reality!
Nice write up.. I really like the way you write fiction.. and true its very addctive.. but nice to see the post with a happy ending.. it all began with pain and ended with happiness.. keep writing fiction..
Dark Waters.....
i love fiction too..
Nicely written hon.. I loved d name Varun..
I think he is a cute guy.. :p
M happy to c he is stil strong.
@ hemu
:)
@ hemu
thnx hemz.. and wil surely try to write a love letter without fiction soon.. :P
@ anwesa
oh! i hope u wer not in tears.. c'mon, anwee. u know varun was really bold, he never cried.. :)
@ muthu
hehe
yup! i need an injection to get rid of addiction for this fiction disease.. :P
@ arv
:) cheer up, arv!
@ sam
hehe.. if u all r happy with fiction part, then i wud write more fiction stories.. :)
thnx for the appreciation
@ mayz
oh! whts the movie name..
@ Diya
its the imagination that makes it more interesting for fiction stories.. so u must be very good at imagination.. :)
@ Dark Water
thnx!
nice to know that u like my fiction stories..
@ vasudha
yup, varun is cute as u.. :)
hey, u too try fiction.. i wud luv to read it..
Keep writing like this girl! :)
Keshi.
beautifuleeeeeeeeeeeeee..
now i wanna write a letter to someone special
@ keshi
sure.. :)
@ chriz
hehe.. try it out.. let me know the result after she receives ur letter.. :P
B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L
I love your addiction... Keep them coming :)
@ kido
thnku.. sure..
wow!!tht was beautiful... :)
OMG... Very touching it was... :) Could feel the emotions.. :)
If u r getting addicted to fiction.. well n good.. carry on.. :) :)
Cheers..!!
Arjun
@ Ria
thnku! :)
@ arjun
:D
i wil for sure! thnx for visiting my blog. :)
happy to have come across yr blog...there's indeed reason to smile.haha
Really nice one...I really liked this point of view u shared...
Adding u in my blog list to read more from you!!!
My blog is http://rahul-bhattacharya.blogspot.com/ :)
nicely written..... that guy has a very tender and a bigg heart.... :)
pease make sure your next fiction has a happy ending, please.....
you kno i am a very emotional person right??!! :( :P :)
hey Ramesh
thnx! :)
@ Rahul
thnx for visiting my blog
lol naman!
yeh sure.. wil try to write a happy ending one.. :P
3 years for a smile??...the expectations are a strange...maybe a "friendly peck" would have been good...yet all in all a good write up...
"It was just those three days of my life that was so special when you were with me. " - a slight grammatical error here :)
Read about the Fake Bollywood Actor:
http://pyasasajal.blogspot.com/2009/06/fake-bollywood-actor.html
Swetha ur getting really mushy these days ha! ;-)
Lovely story writing as usual!
Keshi.
really loved it :)
@ Pyaasa Sajal
thnx for visiting. wil hop on to ur blog..
@keshi
hehehe :P
@ amal
glad u liked it :)
very touchy post , I really liked the way you write...
is sajiv chitran ke liye aapko badhai ..
vijay
pls read my new sufi poem :
http://poemsofvijay.blogspot.com/2009/06/blog-post.html
lol naman! yeh sure.. wil try to write a happy ending one.. :P
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